Cataleptically speaking
a blank tv screen. i vilify
the remote control.
hope’s pinions sit in the ash
tray after failed attempts
to attach her to my prayers.
– be like a phoenix
god damn you!
my fortitude a canvass
for Kandinski
(spells my future)
painted on both sides.
while I masturbate
to the sound of war
. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ggOVNYFlP7Q .
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that’s pretty f*&@ing brilliant. I chuckled at the last line.
tnx for the looks greg..
Powerful stuff, passionate and gritty. Loved it!
it’s a gritty topic carefree..thnx..
love your flow of words
thanks robin .. just on your site, i share your passions.
I have to agree with the other’s comments, I know we can’t keep everything clean. The only issue I had was that you’ve created the text too small, way too small, I had to zoom in to 150% just to be able to see the words. You need to remember there are still a few of us out here who are visually challenged.
thanks for popping by… you’re right on the font. will sort it out.
superb..
keep it up.
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Thank you – that’s brilliant!
..while i masturbate at the sound of war..! Lol
very exquisite ending..! ;]
🙂
magical ending,
keep up the stunning work.
cheers.
i vilify
the remote control.
very cool…
Lovely written, brilliant thought.
Very nice done.
Haha this brilliant loved it
exquisite! last line i like ;D
great.
Happy Writing.
Thanks Morning..